This card is not very appealing. This is because all of the fonts are similar but the the same therefore they are conflicting. Also there is no contrast with size or style within the design. None of the featured are aligned on this card, so it doesn't link and fit as one piece. All text is shoved into the corners and centre, which creates a bad use of white space as it is covering a large amount of the card, spread all over. There is no order of hierarchy due to no contrast and conflicting use of size and font.
I have attempted to change the design of the card, and give it a hierarchy and contrast. Firstly I chose to conflicting fonts, one a script type and the other a sans serif. I enlarged the company name 'Awesome! Comics' and reduced the name 'John Panelreader' and the address to create a larger scale of contrast and more obvious hierarchy. I have aligned the text to the right of the card leaving most white space on the left. Also i have made a gap around the edges with the same width making a border, leaving an even amount of white space surrounding the text.
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